fix some stuff

Author: MattyTheHacker

cogs/make_applicant.py

@@ -93,24 +93,24 @@ async def _perform_make_applicant(
             try:
                 await applicant_member.send(
                     content=(
-                        f"Congratulations {applicant_member.mention}, "
-                        "you are now an applicant! "
+                        f"Congratulations {applicant_member.mention}, you've "
+                        "now been allowed access to the CSS Discord server as an applicant! "
                         "As you are not yet a student at the University, "
-                        "you only have limited access to the server.\n\n"
-                        "If you're already a student, please contact a committee member and "
-                        "we can manually give you access.\n\n"
-                        "If you've already purchased a membership, you can run the "
-                        f"/make-member command, and you will be given full access by "
+                        "you only have limited access to participate in certain channels.\n\n"
+                        "If you are already a student and your induction as an applicant was"
+                        " a mistake, please contact a committee member.\n\n"
+                        "If you have already purchased a membership, you can run the "
+                        "`/makemember` command, and you will be given full access by "
                         f"{self.bot.user.display_name if self.bot.user else 'TeX-Bot'}.\n\n"
                         "Some things to do to get started:\n"
-                        f"1. Check out our rules in "
+                        "1. Check out our rules in "
                         f"{await self.bot.get_mention_string(self.bot.rules_channel)}\n"
                         "2. Head to "
                         f"{await self.bot.get_mention_string(self.bot.roles_channel)}"
                         " and click on the icons to get optional roles like "
-                        "pronouns and year groups\n"
+                        "pronouns and year group\n"
                         "3. Change your nickname to whatever "
-                        "you wish others to refer to you as."
+                        "you wish others to refer to you as"
                     ),
                 )
             except discord.Forbidden: